Banging, Dipun. Make some more. Well over due.
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This is the first episode of The Dipun & Henry Show. Our first attempt so please leave positive ciritism as it is always appreciated.
Please Enjoy :D
*Flash 8 Required (Unless you like headless animations).
Wasnt rated too good, but I liked it,
The sound can be improved, with a REAL mic, but other than that, we want to thank all constructive critisism and there probably wont be another "Dipun and Henry Show"... but you never know :P
You still have a lot of work to do..
You can tell you are still experimenting with your technique like motion tween and looping. the 'humor' if you'd call it that is cliche but i think you were going for that... still i didn't laugh just felt sorry. sound was AWFUL extremely quiet mike work and then adding in artificial sounds that busted my eardrums in my headphones from trying to understand your speach? good effort but you should have spent more time on this movie
MR-E responds:
The whole thing is kinda bad but it was our first attempt. The sound bit im VERY sorry for, we only use speakers and not very good ones at that so its not great. I hope to buy a decent headset for the next version so the sound should be alot better.
Your right, we should hav spent alot more time on it, I think the graphics was let down by the flash but watch out for the next ep, all your comments will be considered ;)
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it seems okay might want to work on the humor and make it longer
MR-E responds:
Yeh, as I mentioned b4 this WAS kinda a rush but thanx for your comment. Storylining is not exactly my thing but the next ep is gonna be TONNES better :D
This sucks..
This sucks ass..
Part 2 is much better..
MR-E responds:
Part 2 aint out yet :/
Not Good...but not *too* bad...
I had to give this a 2/5. I really liked the way it was going with the humor between the two main characters.
The really, really big problem with this flash is that it ended way to abruptly. Being too short wasn't necessarily the problem, it was just the fact that it ended prematurely without giving us, the viewer, any kind of message or point for watching. The whole movie was just...well...stupid. And stupid works well, as long as there's a point to the whole thing.
Develop a plot and some cool identities for these two characters and then let the whole thing work itself out with stupid comedic antics. As it sits now, this potential series is just lame. Spice it up a bit man!!!
Hope this criticism was constructive and helped.
MR-E responds:
I like you, thanx for the reply, this is exactly what i needed. This was was a rush just to see how it went but Im going home 2day from uni so i cudnt spend too much time on it.
Me and Doom are DEFINATELY gonna rethink this out for the next episode.
Thanx angen for the HELPFUL review ;)
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