This would be my third flash but the first two didn't make it. Tell me what you think of it.
(title in work)
Well, you seem to explain things relatively well, but then you also don't seem to be much of a master of art, so one has to take this tutorial with a grain of salt. Your drawings weren't that impressive, and you completely avoided complex animation that includes the limbs. A tutorial on animating that would have been more useful. Also, it would be nice to go back to the menu after you finish a section rather than going straight on to the next one.
not to good and not to bad
you gave a good description and explaied it well
not 2 shabby.
i've seen books for things like this. but my poor ass can't afford them :(. u can't imagane how glad i was for finding this and how much it helped me. u could go into more detail though, like shading and emtion faces. still pretty good job.
Thanx for the review Ill have a new tutorial out soon. I haven't made a decent flash for such a long time, must be because im lazy ^.^'
Basic...but OK
Even though this was not a particularly *good* tutorial, I was still able to learn something about drawing anime. I also learned some basics of drawing, such as drawing guidelines and circles, then erasing them later.
If you add some more depth and detail to the instructional portion of this tutorial, this could get a better score. You got a 3/5 from me...
honestly......
i try to write constructive critisism, but come on. this tutorial consists of three short sections, which dosen't even begin to cover how to draw anime. my only advice is to take what you have, break it down more and extend on it.