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A series of short stories voiced by Tom and animated (crappily) by edd.
The writing/voices were awesome. I really laughed alot at the idea(s). work on your drawing and animation and the both of you could create some really good stuff.
The credit music was an esspecially nice touch.
how asdf was born
you sir are a comic genius
good job I look forward to more of your work
Needs More Effort
Pretty funny once in awhile it would make me laugh at how random it is especially at my favorite part with the talking lemon and it's pretty nice voice acting actually especially on Tom's part with him walking around talking to Penny's and gasping about the chair that he saw especially when he's like "holy crap man! Chair?" It was choppy animation but Tom's character design was OK for 2006.
It got really tiring with just random stuff as if it's a desperate cry for jokes and you've been trying to gather a bunch of jokes together and you stooped so low you had to get talking penny's to start talking to Tom but the one song was really funny that ended it also other than Tom's character design the animation was pretty bad like the backgrounds and the talking lemon, it needs a plot.
Great video and all I'd just really get some more plot ideas to be put into it and take your time and put effort into the videos.
-Review Request Club-
Very original and random. xD
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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