hmm..

It wasn't That Bad, It was kinda Nice :D

So 9/10 4/5 It's On the House!

wow..

for your second falsh you did great,

you have a very good sense of humor, something many of our fellow newgrounders lack. Keep it up and you could be come a great flash artist

Lol

It's quite funny! Keep up the good work

HILARIOUS!!

I loved the part with the vine! In any Mario game, believe me!

It's not that good...

I think you did a fair job, but you could improve on your sprites (they look really bad) and on your animation.

I agree that this was funny. You have a nice sense of humor, even though this is not for all the ages. You have a random story, wich is good and bad in some ways.

What I recomend that you improve in is the animation and sprites. The animation was sometimes kind of slow, and then kind of fast. I suggest you make it a nice speed. Most of the sprites were screwed up. You could see the backround through the sprites (the blocks, for example).

Otherwise, you did a fair job. 6/10