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if u like it, I will make some more..:)
I thought it was interesting but felt that it could have been longer and then better, you cold have had more stuff happening which could have made it funnier too, nice arty style but the graphics could have been a little better.
I think this is a great start - but nothing happens in it after it rains. If you extended it it would be terrific - perhaps after it rains, he misses his bus, he gets chased by a dog, whatever, etc, but get my drift? Bad comic stuff happens with the same theme of keep :).
I think that with more work this might be very good.
I really like the song and it really is nice how the movie is animated basically right around the song. The most basic of concepts, a man is expierencing a bad day and when it just gets worse, what is he to do? I like the ending, it leaves you wondering whether or not it is possible and thne you remember that it is an animated short and it very well could. With some touching up here and there, the characters would look pretty good.I think I like the Bearded man as a character and I would like to see more of him. Keep up the good work, it is a very ncie start.
i think the animation was smooth, i won't say you need to make it longer, cause the length suited this flash :)
The man looked awful though hehe..
I would like to see some more, if you can keep up the standard :)
That was a very old Cliché Xo
If you are doing more of this, show us then :D
Do some more for the audience :D
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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