hmm
quite interesting i really really REALLY liked it but as you said its incomplete so i don't know to give you 5 or a 0 cause the whole thing should be great and maybe this one blammed
nah u get a 5 but only if u complete it k?
eriandor
Author Comments
This is a cartoon I'm still working on so there will be missing backgrounds, errors in the animation etc... but I've decided to post this to see what you think of it so far and get some feedback from you all.
*Also I am hoping to complete this in the next week or so but I've actually be Finishing up another toon (with Dialogue and sound effects). So I'll be posting both of them COMPLETE.
Those Graphics are Amazing!
Make the whole thing and it will defenitly come on the front page!
holy shit
this is sum quality stuff, the use of the white background is very intriging but the end left me wanting to see the rest of it where he shots the robot but it's that well dun there no need to show all of the flash and it add to the mysterious atmospherical effect and also make a great cliff hanker and leave u want to see more as it did to me.
This has potential
I like it. The style is good, the animation is smooth, my only problem is that you say it's a work in progress. Honestly, that's the only reason I can see to blam it. Finish it, and then maybe we'll talk about that 5/5, ok?
Looks good already
Add some SFX, backgrounds to the white scenes, and make it longer. Your character was very cool, like some Inquisitor from 40K, if you know the game. Im looking forward to see the finished work.