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May 21, 2006 | 2:49 PM EDT

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Author Comments

My comp got infected, delay pushed to the end of august. :(
Part 2's release date has been harshly delayed.
I got kind grounded. Pt 2 should be out in July. That's when I'm not grounded.

I added some more. If this doesn't work, I'll just add the WHOLE part 2 to it. Sorry, but i couldn't edit the text for the part I already had. Flash just wasn't working with me on that part. I don't know why.

I added music to the part I added, but like i said, not to what I already had.

The story- A series on how the war began in the Mushroom Kingdom.

Credit: Themushroomkingdom.net, Shyguy Kingdom, and The Spriters rescource

Reviews


ncladyrockrncladyrockr

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not too shabby

Nice piece of work. Can't wait to see what happens next.



skylerthesurferskylerthesurfer

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

it was ok....

it was mostly screwed up the text is horrible! but it wasnt that bad.



MrDziekujeMrDziekuje

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Listen

It was okay. It's your first submission to NG so I think everyone will go a bit easier on you. Hopefully you'll improve over time. Keep it up.


BurntIceProductions responds:

Not my first movie to be submitted, my first movie to get past judgement.


AfroEnigmaAfroEnigma

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Needs more.

1.Needz sound at the start.
2.Most of the start was boring.
3.Needs to be longer.
4.Action is needed so people might not blam you.
5.The "Pissed off Bowser" was a bit ok but still sucked.
6.Text was messed up.

Sort all this out and more and you might be on with something.



Pie-GuruPie-Guru

Rated 2 / 5 stars

not so good

try harder and next time look over your work and sort all the mistakes

hope it helped!