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the tenth army 1

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THIS IS ABOUT THE PRE INVASION ACTION. ALL LEADING UP TO PART 2 ENJOY

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This is a very nice millitari movie

This is realy good movie, meaby it have some bugs and mistakes but everyone movies are having, this is your first movie and it is good.
I like movies about soldiers fighting, I will watch your rest movies.

Nice for a first flash

Considering that this is your first flash (I'm assuming it's the first flash movie you've ever made and not just your first Newgrounds submission), it quite good. Metal Slug sprites are good for portraying battle situations and you exploit it nicely with having the soldiers take cover (in some situations).

What I don't like is the way you have two groups of opposing soldiers standing a few feet away from each other (with zero cover), firing away and only rarely do they hit anything; in fact, it seems only the green guys hit anything. In a real situation, both groups would end up decimated (the green ones would be goners due to their smaller numbers), unless the soldiers are all losers who would as likely as not shoot themselves in the foot.

Otherwise, it's a mighty fine start to the series. The minimalistic plot is decent. It might just be me, but the music picked for it is excellent.

Keep it up and pay attention to proper criticism (ignore people who consider stupid comments like: "This submission sucks!" to be actual reviews) and practice.

hellhunter1 responds:

to put your review in one word u just could have said good movie

HAH! Nice job, dude!

Great! I really like to see my sprites used by someone else in a Flash movie, expecially one this good. Excellent work.

~The_Protagonist

hellhunter1 responds:

thx for the review

Wewt!

Good job Hellhunter, you definately have some talent at this. Work on your stuff some more, its great!

hellhunter1 responds:

thx even is your flash is way better than mine

Kinda seen it already...

Lotsa people do fighting scenes like this cuz they are so easy to find resources for so it's kinda redundant. You didn't credit the music you used (who it's by and where it's from). That's always a big thing for me when I watch flashes- did they credit the proper people other than themselves for finding the sounds/songs? The text in places was not put up long enough to read- even for a fast reader like me. Granted I don't know how to use sprites, but I do know a bit about copy-and-paste tricks to minimize effort or tediousness. It seems like you used that a few times to make it easier to make a flash of this length.

One suggestion: come up with a unique plot that hasn't been done by many people and you might have something good.

hellhunter1 responds:

IT'S MY FIRST FLASH GOD!

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May 19, 2006
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