brilliant!!

getting better and better, creepily funny. i cant wait to see the series. I'm trying to understand the plot but its engrossing.

hmmm...

yes very slad fingery david firthery but uve actually nearly leveled him i mean the voices r quiet and it was quite short make longer next time
but well done

Firthy..

Needs work but you have a shitload of potential. Keep it coming!

Nice

I knew you'd get the critasism from people about the david firth thing, yeah i suppose it was 'like' it but not a copy, i myself am a big fan of firths work and can see the subtle diffarences in both your work. i havent seen much fro firth as of late anyways so its a welcome addition in my eyes to the newgrounds network.

i liked it and hope to see more soon,

Regards, Haz

(ps i really likes the drawrings, the stubble on the main characters face stood out nicely)

Nice Style

This is definately something that I could see David Firth doing... I like the style dude! I must say though... Where are you going with this? Does it have a point.