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*PLEASE NOTE* all sprite credits will be given in the final Mariotrix
please, if your goin to review it, don't say "It's seriously crap blah blah blah" tell me ways to improve it, i'm not sayin i'm the best flash artist in the portal, but I think i did pretty well.
I love the idea of putting in VG Sprites in the matrix, whatever kind they may be, it's a bit short, and lacks sound, but the animation itself is nice and the concept likewise. Looking forward to pt2! Keep it up!
Hey it's Azza W. well done simmo
hey simmo, i think this is fantastic, glad you got somthing onto newgrounds without it getting blammed.
anyway, ithink this was a great flash, but you need more violence, thought it was very good idea but you need to get some more sound into the next one.
remember big fight scene next time ^_^
hey simmo its alex i gave this a 5
simmo i thout this was realy good for a spite but its !!not!! th blue pillits the red 1 he needs to take but well done
A bit poor
I see the potential in sprite animation, but it wasn't executed to well in this one. I
think the pacing was way too fast on this, and it probably could've used some
voices, even if they were crappy Clock Crew voices. Plus it wasn't really all that
funny either. And wow, that Master Chief sprite was not fun to look at. A lot of
this feels like it's been done before (like in Super Mario Reloaded). Not that you're
ripping off anybody, it's just similar. But in either case, it wasn't terrible. You do
certainly know how to animate sprites, so just work on your pacing and maybe
get some voices in.
You have potential
if you go further in flash drawing you will become better and eventually you will dominate us all!:P
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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