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Eulogy For: Birthday Bash
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
05/14/06 – 08/15/08
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This isn't exactly my first submission, but it's my first one that I actually think is good. Unfortunately I used a lot of alpha transparency combined with filters, so I learned that that causes some slowdown. Thankfully I put in a quality selector just to sort of counter it.
Anyway, last year I made a comic on this same day which had Tyler and Margaret doing the same thing. This is the same thing, just now progressed to animation form. And of course, Tyler was always the aggressor in this dispute. "YOU STOLE MY BIRTHDAY!!"
This took me about a week, and I MAJORLY rushed it so I could get it done on the 12th. Plus I had a lot of schoolwork and work-work to do, so my time had been robbed to do this...!
Bon appetit Newgrounds...!
Make a part 2!
Just the voices let it down a little
Good on ya Austineo. I really liked the robot voices. :D
That was totally random in a bad way!!!! Sorry
you need a better plot dude that was kinda gay but the animation wasnt that bad but you dont have to cuss at the end most of the time its not funny and often it turns people off from flash and its kinda like saying im retarded beccause my vocabulary is equal to that of a chimps. second your dialog was complete garbage you would have been better off with out sound and maybe with music... over all id have to say it was pro-par oh wait hold on i forgot your an idiot so Ill put it in terms you can understand YOUR FLASH WAS CRAP but you probably could do a descent flash
Hmm i liked the drawings 'n' stuff.. Too short and too small a plot to ever become great though.. The animation was also only avarenge, but it deserves to be protected..
My advice is that should keep up the good work, practise on more small movies - just to better your skills, meanwhile you practise you should be thinking bout a plot for a longer movie which you are going to make when you hae achieved more skills :)
--Jonas
Would be cool if you made a proper flash with real voices instead of, was it shit-talker you used? But yeah, worth saving cos the animation was good and I'd like to see more.
Your art and animation are great, but I think you over did it with the shadows and filters and stuff you put on it in parts. They looked a little fuzzy and out of focus. If you commited yourself to a story and made it a little longer you could probably make something that would grab a lot of attention.
great style !!!!!!!!!! great graphics ! smooth animation !
only the voices sucked bigtime
Really good, in fact. I look forward to seeing more work that isn't this stupid, though. ^_^
Btw, I gave you a 5, just because I think you deserve to get this into the portal. :P
Hilarious. I liked how you replaced the normal subtitles with 1337. That was fricking awesome. Keep making these, they're hilarious!
5/5
I loved this! The graphics ruled and I loved the humour. I hope to see more from you.
4/8
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Nice animation but why can't you just use normal voices?
That was significantly strange enough that I had to watch it twice to make sure I understood it...and read all the text.
My only beef was you could have used the voice-over for the whole text output, but other than that, good stuff. Propz.
Svg _-~~-_
YAY!
now post the rest you got in Deviantart!
cool fight scene too!!!!!!! oOoOOOOOO!
(this has been a non sensical and poorly typed review)
Awesome work man!
I goted 5 n I wasnt logged in...DOH