Eulogy For: Ralph's Party (Fixed)

(Score at Death: 3.79/5.00)

This submission was BLAMMED by our users.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

05/11/06 – 04/28/09

Submitted by lailla with the following comments:

I'm hoping to make this into a series, of about 20 episodes - each similar in length to this one. And hopefully I'd actually improve on the quality - as I know I really didn't put in enough for this animation. (Although it was a grueling process)

Anyhoo, the story is about 3 main characters Ralph, Jem and Smith. And its a romance triangle, reminiscent of those 'who will she end up with' kinda stories. But its funny too, and well the book is great. If you enjoyed this at all, even remotely - then go to the authors site http://www.lisa-jewell.c
o.uk and buy her book :)

All music, images etc.. by me (unless otherwise mentioned in credits)

Score: 4
Al6200

"Above-average animation, terrible story"

by: Al6200
date: May 11, 2006

This is very well-drawn, and you seem to have alot of artistic skill. But I didn't care for the story at all.

Not only is it generic, but it is also mundane and boring.

I personally don't care for this kind of story, and for a good reason. I know I shouldn't judge a genre I'm predisposed to hate, but this genre you are in is so painfully awful that it must die. Now.

Score: 8
crone1

"crone1"

by: crone1
date: May 11, 2006

like i said fix the voices and it's a winner
can't wait for the next episode

Score: 8
SNS

"Sound is the weakness"

by: SNS
date: May 11, 2006

So i agree with crone1 there, the sound, not the voice, by the sound is.... i dunno it just doesnt sound right...

Everything else is fine, GJ, i hope your working on part 2

Score: 8
darkness-of-light

"ya need to fix the way smith and jem talk."

date: May 11, 2006

The way they move their mouth is still off from when they talk. Fix that and this could be a very well done flash. Good work one everything else and your voice actors are great too.

3.49

Score: 7
morefngdbs

"it reminded me"

date: May 11, 2006

in the opening bit of the kind of cartooning you would see on a Disney Clasic, like lady & the tramp. So nice job on the storyboard backgrounds.
I found it got a bit long, but all in all , well done thanx.

Score: 9
TheShadow305

"Awesome######!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!##############"

date: May 11, 2006

Ilike the movie its really good i can tell you spent quite some time making it coming up with a plot for the movie and the voices for the character it did also have comic relive with the applicants asking for the room but for some reason in the end it looks like a porno is about to happen lol with "You dont have a girlfriend? This can get quite interesting."

Score: 3
gr8bnghitz

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date: May 11, 2006

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Score: 10
Kal24

"Perfect"

by: Kal24
date: May 11, 2006

Great with those sound problems gone and a little new touches this is really great! Amazing work really, I think u've did some changes to the intro and sum other scenes coz it looks way much better.
perfect beggining, cant wait to see more.

Cheers

Score: 0
S-E5000

"Well"

date: May 11, 2006

that was nicely animated but when i watched it it got stuck on the part where he looks through the door and sees that woman so that was kinda fucked up and it didnt make much sense but other than that it was a not bad flash

Score: 5
poison-bananas

"it was good animating"

date: May 11, 2006

it was great animating and sounding

but the storyline was a bit to gay for me

seriously it was a bit camp i thought the men where about to kiss

next story can it be alot less erm homosexual

but it was good work just a bit too gay for my liking but im sure theres alot of people who will enjoy it

Score: 7
hawk-x8

"Well animated"

date: May 11, 2006

It was really good animated, just that I couldn't hear everything they said.
But it was very well done.

Score: 0
FUUCKK

"Ralph and Smith are Gay."

by: FUUCKK
date: May 12, 2006

I can rip off the japanese too.

I'm stealing your backgroung method.

Score: 10
mauwzaa

"This deserves so much better than a 3.6"

date: May 12, 2006

So I fived it!

This is a really good flash, great story, great artwork and some nice animation too. All the components are in place and well put together. Keep up the great work, and I'm looking forward to you next episode.

Your new fan,
Mauwzaa.

Score: 8
Drazuric

"Much better"

date: May 12, 2006

Much better with the sounds fixed!

Great job! ;)

I'll give a 4! ;)

Score: 8
coolbro1

"liked it that was cool and all"

date: August 23, 2006

I really liked how you added a way to adjust things at the bottom ..funny was good to...but the charecters kept changing appearence over and over and over..........8

Score: 7
XwaynecoltX

"(( Nice work ))"

date: December 27, 2006

~~REVIEW~~
this was really neat and had a nice navigation system aswell, good detail and showed lots of effort all around i was really impressed nice job, and keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the file size so that it doesnt take loads of time to download, look for areas to compress, maybe the intense graphics or the audio needs to be cut, but whatever the case try and compress it.

~~OVERALL~~
A big file but has some nice features and decent graphics and whatnot.

~X~