Score: 6
"((( NOTBAD )))"
date: November 1, 2006
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad for your first, it could use mor ethough, such as more detail in the backrounds, and something that really makes it standout would also be nice aswell, anyways neat flash...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort towrads detail, some shading, but also some compressing would be nice...
~~OVERALL~~
A decent first flash, could use some improving though, anyways nice job...
~X~