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u can see but u can not touch........u can see but do not talk...a bit weird and not too explicit...a bit personal too......i hope u guys like it..i trust in ur good taste guys!!...ENJOY....hey id love to have some feedback..
Dark animation could be your thing
You know i'm always honest with my feedback so here it goes:
I love the concept. I can see lots of potential in this project. It grabs your attention and keeps you interested 'til the end. But I personally think the end was a bit rushed and it could be handled more into the pace of the rest of the movie. Good choice on the music, the script is good and in terms of style I love the dark feeling of the illustrations (wrapping up the story nicely).
Good work mate, good to see you're growing up in your style!
Ps. It would be good to see an updated version of this with all the little bits fixed.
A movie that fits very well into the serious genre. The vocie should have slower to fit the tone of both the music and movie. It looks well designed
and with a bit animation we may be looking at one of the best flash aurthors ever. Good luck in your next works.
Has a lot of potential.
The style is fine, I've seen traditional animation like that. Just needs fleshed out with a more cohesive story.
I liked it... quite a lot
You need to work on the sound though. The music... fits the movie but somethings not working and i just can't get my hand on it. The voice needs working for sure, but its not bad, its just that with better voice acting this would get a 8.5, seems like your speaking too fast for the movie, i think your character is in deep thinking and should speak(think) slower...
I loved the art, black and white, and it seems hand drawn, GJ
You still get a 7.5 but could be higher like i said . For me the only problem is the sound and i think its only the voice.... Otherwise everything is perfect, GJ
(( Short ))
This was abit short but had some nice work allthough could use some color to it, it was entertaining you should add more to it like different scenes, anyways nice job.
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Add some color, and add more scene aswell.
A decent animation but could have more.
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