Score: 9

"Perhaps it was the new one..."

by: talkingtrousers

date: July 12, 2008

But i think i've seen this, or the new one else where...

It chills me this, it's exceedingly deep. I'd go all emo.But I shant. This has some serious meaning, one that makes you think, perhaps that in itself is a talent.

Mind you. i'll be creeped out tonight.
It deserves a 9 and I'm only not giving it a ten, because I couldnt quite make out the song at parts.. but a 9's cool right? :P

Score: 8

"Wow."

by: SilveySTARDust

date: July 10, 2008

I am so glad you redid this. Not because it was bad, but because it shows how serious you are to improve upon your skills as an artist. I would say your new version is so much better. I'm glad you took out a lot of the images here that really did not connect with what you were trying to tell. Also some of the more odd gothic like images were distracting from the story you were trying to tell and really lessened the emotional power. You don't want too come off as too emotional as if you are trying to make a scene for the attention of having a scene, being emotional is more about being honest with your feelings and trying to communicate them in a way that others can connect with. It's not an easy thing to tap into it, and in this day and age emotion is often either restricted or overdone. To get it just right will have the best lasting effect on people: because they will see it as real and not just an attention getter or as bizarre. Some people are just not going to connect that way.

As well, your animation skills have vastly improved. Everything that you redid was so much better. Also, whenever an artist is able to revise their work and make it better really shows how great of an artist they are. Be excited for revisions when you can do them because that means you can go back and fix all the little flaws that lessen the story. It gives you the chance to retell the story the way you really want it and allows you the second chance to make it better for the audience. One of the nice things about newgrounds is you get a plethora of critics that will tell you what did and didn't work. That way you also know how it looks from your eyes and the audience. Sometimes as an artist you'll have a certain aspect in mind that you are highlighting but when it comes to show time the audience often sees something else as key.

Score: 9

"Deep..."

by: Bevan7

date: May 11, 2008

I really liked this, it puts a new perspectave on life.

The bit with the the two people and then two gravestones really affected me...

Score: 10

"worth watching several times"

by: Margadona

date: March 8, 2008

I really liked this video........the animation was very creative......My gf liked it too........keep up the good work

Roma

Score: 6

"I don't know"

by: Dyepez

date: December 27, 2007

The animation is quite good, fluid and vivid, but the song sucks... way too mellow both for the subject as for the mood...