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First of what I hope will be many episodes of a cartoon about life as a fruit in a juice shop.
8/14 - Made a couple of minor improvements just for fun
Looks like the birth of a legendary series! lol, great graphics, great animation, great concept and nice and simple graphics to go with it. The filesize is tiny as well, it's a perfect start. Keep it up!
((( ABIT SHORT BUT FUNNY )))
Nice idea about papaya, the animation was abit on the short side, but i did laugh with it, you should add more, i would even suggest making a series out of it all, good iddeas with this one now all you need to do is go with it, anyways nice animation short...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this maybe more paoaya;s or something or make more episodes...
Fun good idea for a character just seems abit short, but its a funny animation, keep them coming...
...this is absolute crap. Apperently Im reviewing at such a speed that Im required to add more to my comment.... soooo.. how about this... vuauoohouhphohourththaack.... btw that is the sound of me vomiting all over your terrible flash.
you seem to think almost everything is absolute crap.
When an Unhappy Papaya decides that life is not worth living, what will happen? Heh, just kidding. I think I would have liked to of seen more from the character, but I can understand that you were trying to keep it short, for a potential series. . I like that Ed is talking to the hand, and is more than aware of him. It's just do bad that he's done for in a sad way. The artwork was not all that bad, albeit simple. I like the design of Ed, a good look - maybe that background could use something more and the hand definately needs sound touching up. I love the opening song and credits. Good luck, it could be a really fun series.
Thanks a lot. I'm working on all the things you mentioned.
I hope your next installments are longer than this one. Quite funny how "Ed" played dead and the talking hand decided to not use him. Interesting ideas, looking forward to more, longer versions.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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