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After a year of hard work and preparation my masterpeice is finally complete.
Well it's nice to see you back, even though I havn't seen any of your previous work. A good sequell with nice and simple graphics and good animation this is, keep it going!
Well this was shot for one, and two, you should add a "REPLAY" button at the end, maybe even some subtitles, Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting. n issue with clock/lock flash's is the "VOICES" always hard to hear or understand whats being said, so i would suggest some subtitles for an overall better understanding of whats going on, More humor, some more funny jokes here and there, some visual humor such as rolling eyes and so on. Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see. With all that said it was silly and funny so noce short you have here.
What just happened?
I'm impressed with the graphics. The white noise clip in the beginning is very cool looking...not sure how you would do that in flash, but it looks cool. The drawings were good and the spinny thing at the end was cool looking as well.
I watched this three times...does the guy say "would you like to pet my goat?" I'm not sure, but either way this is pretty pointless. It's too short, hard to hear and has no storyline whatsoever. I will say that with this return flash, I'm not happy to see you back.
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Try adding humor and a storyline. Also what the hell is edn?
My goat takes advice from no one. And for the answer to your question, watch Eskimo Bob.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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