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A girl enjoys a lollipop until I walk by...
A relatively quick thing. Just a simple joke.
Fbf animation. Took around 4 hours.
Hope you like it. Reviews are very much appreciated. Specially any containing decent constructive criticism.
I enjoy hearing what people think.
(( LOL SHORT BUT VERY FUNNY ))
LOL this was very funny, really made me laugh, but you should have made more longer, you had some really nice art and drawings just abit short, anyways nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, with more content.
Funny toon with neat drawings but just abit on the short side.
Thanks a lot!
If it made you laugh, I consider its job done. I still maintain that if I'd continued it longer, it would've gotten less funny.
.....i wanna lollypop
Hehe, that'll teach here.....having a lollypop...HOW DARE SHE !
I liked it, i really did, the style and graphics are vert nice, and the humor is just randomic....is that a word, yes? "randomic"....it's like random but.....okay...yeah
It does miss a bit of your far east look, but it doesn't all have too be.....far east....XD
Keep it up!
Glad you liked!. :)
I really should do more animations.
Quite right - variety is the spice of life and I'll follow my muse wherever it goes, taking inspiration from wherever.
Kind Of Sick, But Still Pretty Good
The graphics and style were very good in this movie. Having them walk on a background that was coloured with crayons (am I right?), looked cool and unique. The sound was right on cue, and there were bo jerky movements.
Well, it was too short, and the Newgrounds pre-laoder didn't work; it just went right on too the 'Click To Begin' thing.
The bg was drawn with cheap coloured pencils. As were the gfx for the Timing-based shooter.
The pre-loader does work - I specifically changed the programming to make it go to my own screen. Why should folk have to click to play twice?
Glad you enjoyed what it was.
WHAT WAS THAT ALL ABOUT?!?!?!?! heh u made me laugh^^
You know it be true.
You know I must admit, this little old got a chuckle out me. I love the simplistic storyboard esque backgrounds, with all the varying colors. It really compliments the main characters and their more "full" designs. I think that the girl and the boy's body were drawn really well and I loved the colors used, they were quite vivid. The sound effects were simple, like a licking effect, and they fit in well and suited the intentions of the movie. I would defenately watch more from you regarding this type of work.
Keep up the good work,
Hey! A master reviewer.
Thanks for the great review. Glad you like the contrast between the bg and the characters.
Your review has some great compliments there - you really let me know what you like.
Some constructive criticism might be nice though, to also let me know what to work on. That's my only real criticism of your review.
I give this review 6.5/10
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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