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UPDATE: May 5, 2006

Wow. I really didn't expect to make front page at all. THANK YOU SO MUCH to all who have seen this episode and voted.
I really do appreciate all the comments, even the negative criticism, as those are valid & constructive points too. I understand that not everyone will love it, but always keep in mind that it is the very beginning of a series, so it has no choice but to grow and change. Hopefully for the better.
The second part of this episode will be out very soon so look for it. THANKS AGAIN!
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Episode 1: "Roses"

This is the first part of episode 1. I had to split this episode into two parts, as it's total length is about 15 minutes. Look for part two coming soon.
This is a story about a young man who knows that the only way to understand his past is to look on to the future. The series will be several episodes long, and work is currently underway on the newest material. It's taken alot of hard work and time so I hope you like it. :)

Reviews


silv3rgo4tsilv3rgo4t

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

what an origionality... actually the opposite

checklist for generic story

-crappy city [x]
-hitman [x]
-doesnt like job [x]
-killings called "justice" [x]
-dead guy [x]

ok besides being completely generic
this has some of the better voice acting in it and i likde that
uses a lot of metaphors and is kind of shakespearean in the way he talks



LandRunnerLandRunner

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Goatee = fail. No excuses.

Other than that, good job.



Aceu2ezAceu2ez

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Yay =)

That was pwnage, The kitty didn't die =)


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professionalnetprofessionalnet

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It was a great flash

I liked the flash alot. One question though. Was he a hired hitman? I want to see part II a.s.a.p!



Lord-KristofLord-Kristof

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Quite good

I liked the main character. The dialogue was good, but I felt it was somewhat artificially filosophical. But you got my attention, I'm waiting for part 2. Oh yeah, and the music was great - the seven in "Sound" is for some sounds and the silent talking of the hero in the beginning.