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UPDATE: May 5, 2006

Wow. I really didn't expect to make front page at all. THANK YOU SO MUCH to all who have seen this episode and voted.
I really do appreciate all the comments, even the negative criticism, as those are valid & constructive points too. I understand that not everyone will love it, but always keep in mind that it is the very beginning of a series, so it has no choice but to grow and change. Hopefully for the better.
The second part of this episode will be out very soon so look for it. THANKS AGAIN!
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Episode 1: "Roses"

This is the first part of episode 1. I had to split this episode into two parts, as it's total length is about 15 minutes. Look for part two coming soon.
This is a story about a young man who knows that the only way to understand his past is to look on to the future. The series will be several episodes long, and work is currently underway on the newest material. It's taken alot of hard work and time so I hope you like it. :)

Reviews


AntiangelicAngelAntiangelicAngel

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Shit that was nicely done.

I thought the story was generic, but was well done. The art was decent. The voice was bad... I'm not sure if it was the voice actor or the microphone or both, but it just wasn't crip nor assasiny.



Disturbed-FanaticDisturbed-Fanatic

Rated 4 / 5 stars

It was pretty good

I have to agree with the guy behind me about the art, its good but i have seen better. I am no artist and i suck at drawing but thats why I watch and not make. Good job overall, little work on the artistry i suppose, You bet i will watch part 2 though.



OzMafiosoOzMafioso

Rated 2 / 5 stars

A great story dragged down by the graphics

You had a fantastic story going on here, not too bad, but the entire thing was dragged down a few notches due to the horrible artwork. It looks like shit, to be honest, things are out of proportion, the smoke from the hookers mouth looked shitty, the main character was drawn funny many times through out the clip. But thats only focusing on the negative. On the positive side, great story, nice delivery, great voice over. Just needs a different artist, unless you can do some major sharpening on your artskills, but thats just one mans opinion. I'm sure there are a thousand out there who agree and disagree with me. All i can say is just keep on keeping on, don't let any reviews negative/postitive stop you from what your doing. PEACE



MadMotionMadMotion

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice Job

I can see this as a step in the right direction. If you keep at it it can only get better from here. Looking forward to seeing how you extend this series.....you have my attention.



FillInTheBlankFillInTheBlank

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Damn.

That shit was krunk. When is the next one going to come out? Cant wait.
All my 5.