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  • Daily Feature May 5, 2006

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UPDATE: May 5, 2006

Wow. I really didn't expect to make front page at all. THANK YOU SO MUCH to all who have seen this episode and voted.
I really do appreciate all the comments, even the negative criticism, as those are valid & constructive points too. I understand that not everyone will love it, but always keep in mind that it is the very beginning of a series, so it has no choice but to grow and change. Hopefully for the better.
The second part of this episode will be out very soon so look for it. THANKS AGAIN!
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Episode 1: "Roses"

This is the first part of episode 1. I had to split this episode into two parts, as it's total length is about 15 minutes. Look for part two coming soon.
This is a story about a young man who knows that the only way to understand his past is to look on to the future. The series will be several episodes long, and work is currently underway on the newest material. It's taken alot of hard work and time so I hope you like it. :)

Reviews


d6Meshd6Mesh

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 10, 2006

Very promising

I think you have a great storyline worked out there (kinda Sin City). Also good voice acting. The only thing that needs improving is the animations and graphics overall. I look forward to coming episodes. :)



Zippaz1212Zippaz1212

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 9, 2006

Very impressive

I honestly loved this, a very good job at making this. I really look forward to seeing episode 2 or episode 1 part 2. Which ever is next i look forward too. Great beginning, Good middle, and class ending. Left people, me included in suspence. Very good job with the action, not too much not too little.In all, congratulations.



YourMomIsOedipusYourMomIsOedipus

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 8, 2006

Definetly has potential

Pretty good start to your series; has room to grow. Writing seems pretty good, but I'm not crazy about the graphics, though as long as the story is good that doesnt matter as much to me. One thing though, The japanese writing for gun is in Hiragana; since gun is a foriegn word it should be in katakana...look it up on the internet if you're not sure what I am talking about. Looking forward for more episodes.



Kor-RuneKor-Rune

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 7, 2006

Beautiful.

The dialouge was equally breath-taking as the graphics were. I'm truely looking forward to more of it, keep it up.

Now, for the problems. I ddin't see many at all, other than the character transitions in movement. They weren't even that bad i the first place, and I'm sure you will get them perfect soon enough. It will only get better.

I can tell this will be a memorable flash series, good work.



SerraStrykeSerraStryke

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 7, 2006

It's pretty good.

Looking forward to see the rest of the parts, graphics were pretty clear, style, not so much as being there but perhaps developing. Sound/music...not a bad choice, seems more generic though. Violence is tame, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. No humor but i highly doubt that there's supposed to be any humor involved.
Hurry up with the second part.