i liked it

it was a good story and should have gotten better reviews. ^_^ keep up ur good work, and try to improve ur drawing skills, thats all im gonna say.

hell

cmon ur art skills for this werent great at all. or as i should say they sucked ass. its not funny the songs ok but he art just killed it all.

Could have been better.

I thought it was pretty good. However, you could have made it a lot funnier. It was still alright though.