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Haha! You will surely like this. Gordon and Mike are my friends. I am making a joke about them and another girl who is my classmate.
(( ABIT SHORT ))
LOL well that was very short, and could be improved, it needs more animation, aswell as some much needed added color, but most of all more content is needed, notbad sofar, just needs more effort.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting... Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland... Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more
shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...
A very short flash but could be improve don and made into something nice.
Points were deducted for length... It was however, cool while it was going on. I loved the back ground music and the animation was pretty good. You should make a full version some time soon.
it was a pretty cool animation.... but it way too short, which was a shame because it was cool to watch. if this is a preview, then it's alright, but if not... i think it should've been longer.
Would have been great, if it had been longer.
Good start though.
lively animation with good timing and pace. I like it!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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