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Chase and the Dark One are one their on training. What kind of training you ask? And what's going with Woody? Why did he collasped at the end of Chapter 6? You're gonna have to watch and find out!
Each film, better than the previous
WOW! You are a nice editor on Flash... I like very much your series, this time, Dark One it's very powerful!
But this time, the scene of the training in the night it's a little bit ugly... But, i like the rest of the movie! :)
Ah! The training montage.
In the review to the last chapter I discussed the need to provide Woody and Dennis some actual background. They actually already are in need of character development, as so much has happened to them in a very short amount of time. After seeing this episode... it could have been a terrific spot to do just that.
The training montage could have been a lot shorter. We get it you know. :D He trained long and hard and ofc it's necessary from the point of story. This chapter is meant as an interlude, I get that. But it still could have been a more informative interlude. Firstly, why does Chase not even ask anything about the gloves? We are told what they do... but what is their purpose? To whom do they belong. How can they be used to stop Julian? Is that what they are for? Does Julian know about them? Does he at least guess about them (Y'know... after seeing 2 Chases at once?!)
Generally this episode could have had a LOT more essence to it. We could have learned more about the world, characters, powers at work etc, etc. You could have even told us about The Great City or about the wall on which they were on? Where are they training anyways? Are they sure it's safe there?
Also, most definitely you should tell us more about Davis and also about Dennis/Woody. They don't get enough attention at all!
Yeah. This episode was all flashing and now essence. Even the thought "I wonder how Woody is doing?" did little to remedy the situation.
Generally...
I was hoping for a better job than last time. You see, chapter six was quite a let-down, even worse than chapter five! I agreed with one of the users, wishing that you could develop an intriguing plot and produce fantastic fight scenes. If you can reply, I'll be more than glad to accept the fact that you will make an effort to produce a better animation. Thank you for your attention.
PyronX responds:
Notice to all* I apoligize for making this chapter a little short*
I promise to make a better effort for the next up coming chapters. That chapter of the story was a little tricky to make, it wasn't one I was looking for. But I promise the next ones will be better.
Another LF2 flash ^^...
But how did you made it that far? 7?... I didn't watched the others, but this one... it's kinda slow paced... more action ^^ more INTERESTING story ^^... bah, it's still LF2, so >_> I voted 5 (but just to motivate you to do a better job next time ^^). however, you got a 6 in review.
LF forever =)