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May 1, 2006 | 3:04 AM EDT

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**WARNING!** Apparently it's much more graphics intensive than I had thought, you may want to consider viewing on low quality or else the sound gets way out of sink :(

Damn, late after so many straight hours. Well anyways... Ok, so it's late, and ever so unpolished, but you must forgive me because this is my first ever attempt at flash!

I know it could use some music, better sound quality and so on, so those are what points I hope to work on for the next chapter.

Note: All characters and persons represented in this flash should not take offense but should realize they are present because of their particular influence on Newgrounds. Also I'm well aware I used a copyrighted song, but it was in the name of parody so I hope you all will forgive me. Happy late pico day! (and birthday to Tom)

Reviews


AdrironaAdrirona

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 1, 2006

Good job!

Hey, I thought this was great! Funny idea :)
Cant wait 'til chapter 2!
But the voice in the beginning was very low, I could barely hear what he/she? said. So thats why you got a 4 in sound.
Keep it up!


PVP-BoCS responds:

Yeah, really sorry about the low quality of sound and it being very quiet. I will be rerecording soon as I have the opportunity and better equipment! Thank you for you comments :D!


MelovfemaleMelovfemale

Rated 3 / 5 stars May 1, 2006

do chapter 2 or ive just wasted my time

graphics are alright
nice sound near the end no violence yet :( not much to do an not funny it realy drags on through the vid but i can see you probbaly tryed hard so just do chapter 2 and im sure it will make it worthwhile watching it


PVP-BoCS responds:

Yes, Ch2 is where the fun starts, sorry you didn't get your violence fix on this one, just had no time :P I will also be fixing this one up to cut on the dragging bits. Thanks for the comments!


FurnockFurnock

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 1, 2006

It was great!

It was good, really really good, keep it up :)

c(>_o)


PVP-BoCS responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I wouldn't say it was THHHAATT good but I really appreciate you saying so! Thank you so much for the compliment! :)


Strange-KidStrange-Kid

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 1, 2006

It would be excellent

But low quality didn't help to stop the sound from going unsynch.


PVP-BoCS responds:

Yeah I know :( I am certainly working on it though!! I will fix it ASAP along with many other parts. Thanks for the comment! :D


remyzeroremyzero

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 1, 2006

Good job

The graphics were good, I had trouble hearing you though, your sound was too soft towards the beginning, try to fix that, or put subtitles in there please. It's really good for your first try at flash.


PVP-BoCS responds:

Thanks, I appreciate the comments and I completely agree! The sound needs much improvement and I will be sure to work on rerecording and fixing this up soon as I have the means! Thanks again :D