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I made it just on time.. My first full-flash movie. I don't know if it's any good hyhy. I really like the ending but.. well see yourselves^^
I loved the whole unexpected ending. I thought some giant fight would ensue, but the whole drop down to hell thing was really original. Keep up the great work...
LOL, I love the Phone part! let me explain
the phone part when he calls, I think he calls Satan. At least i think. OK now to the movie, I like it thats why i give it 10 and the movie is ok, It could've had voices saying stuff I am downloading AT&T Natural voices now, so i can use them for my flash!
Enjoyable watch. Very stylised.
++++ I really like the style of the graphics... ultra stylised vectors. Works well in this animation. Really sharp.
+++ Some nice detail. Like in the b-day cake at the start. I'm guessing you made a special effort on that...
-- You know, it wasn't until the 2nd viewing (when I didn't have to put most my attention on the text) that I realised the girl was an angel. Maybe make her wings whiter with rounder feathers?
+++ Some nice visual design. I liked Pico's knobbly knees and also the 2 goths.
--- After watching it for a 2nd time, I'm still unsure what happened at the end. Or is that the point? If so, seems kinda cheap.
++ Though it did make me chuckle whilst muttering 'what the fuck'
Enjoyable watch. Very stylised. Very impressive for a first.
You deserve atleast a 3 or higher score for this. Though making Pico's enemy come back not being very creative, it was backed up by good graphics and a nice script. Good job.
I thought it was pretty good. The graphics were great. The only things I found unlikeable was the music when everything went all Final Fantasy, it sounded awful. Also, what's with the ending? I am so confused.
A short film about a park bench
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