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Made in Flash 8
This is my first Flash movie and I was kind of learning as I went along. There is quite a bit of text, just so you're prepared. I worked on this for about 2 months. Tell me if something isn't working right, I'll try to fix it.
i was OK
but graphics need a bit more improvementad there should be audio instedof subtitles,but other than that it was pretty good
(( AWSOME ))
The animation was really good, i was impressed from start to the end, great pico character aswell very smooth looking, also some nice smooth nimating with cool music that was just right, anyways nice job, keep up the good work, cant wait for more stuff like this...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was almost perfect...
Good pico day flash very smooth animation...
Realy good for a first flash.
The graffix were ok.
I loved the music.
And the story was awsome.
Hope to see a sequal and more work from you.
good but not great
well it was a kick ass story and for your first flash it was good the only bad thing is it didn't have voice acting but rather than that it was a god flash but it was too long Lol you should make a sequel btwXD
Hmm...pretty cool, man!
This one had a good storyline, ecent graphics, and lotsa music! The only thing that was lacking was voices! And of course the graphics could eb better but theyre just fine...thanx for using my music, mate! Kee up the good work!
A short film about a park bench
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