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The movie doesn't end when it says 'happy pico day <3 BFS'. Please keep that in mind. Wouldn't want you to miss the movie.
I will respond to EVERY review.
Please note this flash does not have a preloader. It takes roughly two seconds for a DSL connection to show the first frame.
I've made this deliberately short by the way and it's meant to be fairly arty towards the end.
The initials in the background stand for "Cuddles McGee" and "Lost_Chances". Also milky from the Blur music video.
I'll take a stab at constructive critisism.
The flash seemed more than an animation more than an ad for Pico day. More meat was a necessity, plus the guns were firing before the were shot. A greater attempt should have been made to choreograph the gun_mc and the shots to be at the same time.
Now this flash isn't necessarily bad, I just hoped I helped with my comments in future flash projects from you.
Thank you very much and your constructive critisism will be kept in mind next time either I or BlueFlameSkulls attempt a flash.
Looked more like a preview.
With it being so short it really wasn't much,very nice artwork though and good music to go with it.
Thats what happens when you need to rush a little to fit it in for Pico Day.
That was very good. I knocked down a point on graphics because the pistols were firing before they were actually firing and it was quite noticble I suggest you make the pistols only fire when there firing or should of got a little more practice (no offence). The style was good the drawing was very good it was sort like Pico turned into a adult but overall very good. The sound was good , the guns sounded realistic , but again I knocked it down a point because the guns looked like were firing but there was know sound making it look kind of cheesey.The violence was good beause well there were guys getting shot and the blood was designed well. It was a movie its not interactive. I gave it one on the humor because it was slightly amusing whatching the guns firing at the the ground without any sound.
Overall it was a very good movie good graphics , great style , gorgeous sound , nice violence , no interactivity and rather pathetic humor (it wasn't supposed to be funny I know) but one again the guns shooting at the ground with no sound is a minor setback but still quite noticeable. Overall very good i'm looking forward to more of your submissions. Thank you for your time.
I don't know when another flash will be released by me and BFS is away due to his internet being cut off. I havn't even started and I can't draw to tell the truth. Maybe I'll get better at coding. Who knows?
OK it was but it's only 45 sec. and it's a little "same thing" so...Fuck it.
It was a flash for Pico Day.
great graphics, some errors here and there but still was good nice job
Thanks, no one is perfect.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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