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Submitted: 04/30/2006 | 07:23AM EST

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Current Score: 2.26 / 5.00

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Frames:900
Fps:24
Library:17 items

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Average Score: 4.9 / 10

Score: 4
LogFish

"Not there"

date: April 30, 2006

Looks like you've got that whole camera pan and stick generator crap working fine there - but that's all you've got! Use the camera thing to better use, have characters that aren't poo. There isn't a story, it's just random sliding around etc. 17 objects too, bit too few for any impressive work - detail is where it's at. Why not use those techniques in the action sequence of something that has a point - the random stick thing has to be incredibly impressive to get anywhere these days.

September 10, 2008

Author's Response:

To be honest with you, I was around 12 when I made this, so if you wanted something good with a story and some decent action sequences (surely misspelled that) you should at least cheack back in when I find the patience and enthusiasm to make another flash movie.
The camera pan I got from some flash tutorial (can't remember which) and I actually animated everything else fbf/tween myself.
I hate this creation of mine (although there are some good parts), so if you don't like it you'll just get a "Sure, what ever...".
Also, it was one of my first relatively completed flash movies, and my character insight and development wasn't that advanced (as I told you, I was TWELVE YEARS OLD when I made this). Got my point?

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Score: 4
FarrenCronwing

"Suprised"

date: April 30, 2006

Actually, im suprised it didn't get blammed. I gave you a 1, it sucked pretty bad. but not quite a 0. If this is your first flash, you did great. If not, you should just give up making em.

September 10, 2008

Author's Response:

'Twas my first succesful flash on NewGrounds, meaning it was the first that didn't get blammed. Quite frankly, I was surprised, too. Might remake it (although I've taken over 2 years to respond to the reviews)

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Score: 8
Omega49

"It was O.K. I guess."

date: April 30, 2006

It needs a story behind it. That tells what happened to the big guy and all. I was kind of lost during this submission.

September 10, 2008

Author's Response:

You might just get that story if I ever bother remaking it or making a sequel. Then again, I'm probably too lazy.

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Score: 6
xPHS

"... the hell is that meant to be?"

by: xPHS
date: April 30, 2006

A bridge, how exciting. But what is the story line behind it? Why does a huge random block thing appear right near the end? What happened to the big dude? Why are you telling us anything?????

September 10, 2008

Author's Response:

Because, this was my first [i]succesful[/i] flash movie on newgrounds.
I might continue it, though, if I find the enthusiasm to do it.

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Score: 3
cerealkilla187

"wtf"

date: April 30, 2006

yea....that blows

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