Score: 5

"(( Cute and entertaining ))"

by: XwaynecoltX

date: December 18, 2006

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was cute, and very short but it did make me laugh so nice job there maybe add more shorts with this flash to give it that extra touch besides that it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was very short, so in that type of flash why not either add more content or you could make a flash with a number of short flashes like this one or even adding it as a part of some collab would be good aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and very short but its cute.

~X~

Score: 3

"Not to my satisfaction."

by: Andersson

date: April 29, 2006

It was a bit wierd. Maybe you thought that'd be humoristic, but it was in my opinion just wierd. No unexpected things, just a lot of things.

Heh, no real plot either, just some things that would occur and then it'd end in the middle of it.

It doesn't seem complete to me, the sounds are a bit off. If you'd put a constant sound, from the athmosphere and surroundings in the background, the other short clips of sounds wouldn't start and cut off so quickly.

Well, you do know the basics of flash and it's always good. But I'd like to see you develope something into a larger production than this, or atleast one with some good jokes, a real plot that is.

Anyways, good to see you on the Portal.

-Bahamut

Score: 9

"That was actually pretty good"

by: Second2none

date: April 29, 2006

I recommend making the music not stop immediately when it says replay, but stop the moment the person presses replay.

Second, a background might've made things nice, but all in all, it was pretty smooth animation skills. Way to go! ^^

Score: 3

"It was ok..."

by: ldl67

date: April 29, 2006

its not very good, but its not very bad either - its ok.

Score: 7

"Short but funny!"

by: Snekvik

date: April 29, 2006

Somthing that short can't be good, but you made me laught!!! Hehe