Score: 9
"Very Entertaining! :)"
date: July 10, 2007
Graphics: (A+) I loved the Japanese (far east Asia in general) based artwork. The backgrounds and the line movement of the characters looked very good. I found that you chose just the right colors as well.
Style: (A+) I have never seen any other author make an animation like this one (except for you).
Sound: (A+) The narration was very unique. The music blended well into the scenes. Being in Japanese or Chinese or Korean (you get what I mean), I couldn't understand but it was very clear (I think) and you put a lot of effort into it. You told it like a story, and I could tell you put a lot of effort into it. The tone of voice you used seemed very calming, like you were trying to ask a angry person a sane question.
Violence: (n/a) I mean, come on. They are so cute.
Interactivity: (A) You can't put much interactivity in this but you did have a play button.
Humor: (A-) This wasn't a humor oriented animation but the fact that they had what was supposed to be the others (not trying to be a stereotypical person).
Overall: Raar and Ryk is a very entertaining piece of flash!
Other Comments:
1. Have you ever thought about being an author for children's books?
1. a. This subject might go over their heads a little bit.
1. b. I agree with iDattebayo, smoking (even with a pipe) is probably not the best thing to put in a children's book or animation.
