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Apr 24, 2006 | 1:43 AM EDT
  • Daily Feature April 25, 2006

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Made in a couple of weeks for a online Flash Competition. Flashwars.net

This movie is a small part of a greater large movie which i'm still formulating. For now some feedback would be fantastic!

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ralos12345ralos12345

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 2, 2012

what the fucking name of the song *_* tell me now!!! plz



Nick8akonNick8akon

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 26, 2011

good...

i like it, here are some ideas. don't make it seem like he's gonna help people in need make it more or less in the beginning he was just testing his powers, then he began to use them for good but in the end he uses them to take over the world, summon more demons, and while the humans develop more fire power to kill them as the war rages on making the scenes of action more epic and chosen humans with powers come out of the wood work as the story gets more and more in depth.


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ioulia09ioulia09

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 22, 2011

an idea about the extra scene

when he turns out to the demon you could use red eyes, sharp teeth, a red flaming aura around him and his nails to be bigger and sharper so like that he can cut skin and body. then when he comes to his limits to stay in his human form (after many kills) he can transform to his ancient demon form. all this came to my mind when i saw the extra scene. i think that my idea will be helpful.



Tibiademon555Tibiademon555

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 22, 2010

so satanic

that was the most satanic scene i have ever seen. but you can make it even better!!!

1: make the floor crack and burst into flames when the demon is being summoned.

2: make the candle fires turn dark when he is saying the words.

3: the demon should appear as a red-eyed shadow, then change color.

4: make the knife have an eviler shape, be made of stone, and have some symbols carved on it.

Also the boy looks kinda like twilight XD but you should leave it like that. And for those assholes who think im giving him orders, no. It is called IDEA. And that is what fans are supposed to do. Give authors ideas so that their work is better.


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WoWfan87WoWfan87

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 26, 2010

it was awsome

i hope you will finish it soon


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