Enjoy the movie. Give me comments or critiques if you want.
The flash is peaceful and kind of random. I made this flash in July, 2005. It's two minutes long. There's a lot of frame by frame work with the guy moving and a lot of tweening with background and effects. I worked really hard on it for like 3 days in black and white. The fourth day I colored it. I got inspired after I took a walk in the park with my younger brother. First song by Carbon Leaf, second by Punchline.
Visit my DeviantArt site if you want to see some of my unfinished flashes.
Nice start.
Music was fitting.
The boy needs to have more character.
Like something defining.
Right now he is a subordinate character, and you want him to have more pazzaz! This can get really good if you let it.
So give him more speaking lines, perhaps a sidekick? Just make it to where when he talks, he's not like the every day normal kid who runs around, bla bla bla saves someone bla bla bla.
Make him STAND OUT!
Then we can see where it goes from there.
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its not the worse thing i've ever seen but not the best. There wasnt really much of a plot or climax as a story it was lacking, but other wise very well done and the song was nice.
wow.. that was a great flash...
im just reviewing this so that i can get back to it later :)... but i liked it verry much.. thanks for sharing it.
Great Job
Really injoyed this peaceful flash. Good animation and liked the 3D in it. Hope you make more
huh?
i really dont get what it was supposed to be about but i really liked it none-the-less.
The animation was beautiful. A few more and your going on my fave authors list.