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This was an assignment that I did for media at school. With that said its a bodge spy take-off that goes for about 2 minutes, any comantary (no matter how harsh) is welcome.
it was not that bad, nice drawn and stuff, but the voice acting could've been better(i'm not an expert at this, christ this is the thing i suck at the most, but i'm learnding) and now i know why my friend proposed this, u should make the sound in one track, and build ur flash around it, first i didn't agreed with him but now i do, and i know why, it was very difficult to understand the voices and everytime a sentence starts u can hear it by this fuzzle thingy, and was it just me or did u do the sound effects at some part? cause if u did, don't do it again, use sites for effcts its more natural....the story is not that original, but hey what is these days? so that isn't a minus, the pointe at the end was nice, so it was funny and all that shit, i liked the graphics and tweening, only sound is a thing u should work on.
ps; maybe add some background sounds, maybe for ur intro u could've used a bond theme or something, chasing theme also would've been nice.
hm, interesting... the voices seemed a bit lame to me - all sounding quite alike. more different voices coud solve this problem - or more emotions to the existing ones. but pleeeeease not in the "GET OUT"-way! this nearly blew my speakers;))...
the ending was ok, not very new, but ok. but for this ending the whole thing was way too long (imho). either shorten it or maybe add something, that helps to make it more interesting, a little bit more stirring - music e.g.
but overall not to bad, with a little improvement here and there i think we can expect better entries of you soon!
it was ok but the "GET OUT!" was a little bit disturbing
Could do with some more work and the voices sounded a bit stuffed but this could become real nice with a bit more work.
Not bad. Need work though!
The sound was a bit muffled, but the graphics were quite good. It need just a wee bit more work and then it will be great.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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