it good for first time

it good for first timeyou can inprovment but it was good keep work

well,

i am pretty hard on flashes, expecting a high standard, but i have just recently been watching some begginer flash tutorials so i could make one of my own, and was overwelmed with options and buttons, so anyone who can make something better than stupid sticks that have no sound for first flash should have the right to pass. i guess

Not very good

No story line. The graphics were ok. The ending did make me laugh. Not much point to it though.

surprise ending

wow thsi ur first submission this is very good from alot of the other crap taht comes in some people eevn have like their tenth submission and they still suck but you did good and eevn made a good laugh witht he surprise ending . good job

cool

this movie is cool.. nice idea! :)