Score: 9
"Great! Could be better!"
date: October 6, 2008
This was really fun.
Not sure where you're currently standing with the sequel but I would love to see some back story, cause that ending sure brought up some questions lol For instance, is this an underground temple built by some race that's never been discovered before? Is the main character experienced with archaeology? What is the consequence of waking the monkey? Who is this monkey? haha You know, stuff like that. It would really give you a better story if we had that plot detail cause you certainly have a good foundation that you can build from.
Another thing I would like to see is some more sound work in terms of FX and background music, give it a little more atmosphere, you know.
Great job! Hopefully you're working on the sequel right now or at least plan to do so because this really seems pretty interesting, I would love to see where you take this story.