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it took me approximatly 3weeks.
so, um, enjoy!
( except that i couldnt finish it because of lack of memory.. )

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(( Interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was interesting, i like the use of color, and the odd song was neat aswell, you could have more animating especialy with the characters like arms and legsm anyways nice animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation from the characters.

~~OVERALL~~
a strange flash with an odd song, good animation though.

~X~

meh dont listen to taro.

we were all suckish noobs once, what he said went to far. with a pay load of practice you can make a good movie. keep at it kiddo. plus i know were you live.

wtffff!!!111

gd for a beginner but it was still poor as an animation. Needs alot of practice

the beginning was gd. gr8 drawing and i was expecting to see something wonderful... until....

The FUCKING middle. I mean WTF was up with ur FBF animation. The colourful animation turned into a horrible lazily animated black and white moving lines and for a while i didn't know wtf was going on. U shudve jus kept the simple artwork u did in the beginning because gd colourful animation in the beginning+ retarded lazily made fbf animation= Dung (A.K.A Poo/Shit).

Im not even gna start the comment about the end because that rounded the whole animation up, which concludes as RuBbIsH.

O and the sound... please dont put fucked up jap music which disgraces japan next time... thank you

From
Anton.C(Kazuki's friend)

Yuta...

Your animation was bare suckage.

Sry Mr. Yuta the Circle, you need fingers to animate
properly.

THAT MUSIC GOT SO IRRITATING
SO YOUR SOUND GETS 0.

Why were the fbf bits black and white?
THAT'S JUST LAZYNESS!
COLOR YOUR FRAMES, mate.
What was up with that rando

The drawings were alright, but you cut
over the outlines with your detail.

THE RUNNING SCENES WERE TERRIBLE!
ALL OF THEM!

#1 The background was going backwards
#2 The background wasn't moving
#3 There was no background, and the running was pretty badly
animated.
(That pretty much covers the running)

And dude, if you dont have enough memory to finish an 800kb .swf file
Then you have issues.
I suggest you go buy some now,
or delete SOME OTHER SHIT.

In closing, I say you are a very nice circle,
just learn to animate.

Nice... but

That was nice, but the suicide comment is a never (just to point out to those who feel that they need to do it, don't). I didn't really like the message, she did say sorry. But the animation was nice and the fight scene was kinda cool.

Credits & Info

Views
2,369
Votes
17
Score
2.31 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 20, 2006
4:39 PM EDT