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Inu Diaben vs. The Fat Ninja. This is a flash for a forum where we battle each others ninjas. May the best flash artist win.

Thanks to DoucheFlagon (Utz) For the voice of the clerk.

Reviews


slick2slick2

Rated 5 / 5 stars

XD..that was great

that fat ninja ordering all of that food..had me cracking up..i couldn't understand what the other ninja was saying half of the time..but other than that it was great..keep making more


PureCarnage responds:

I'll be paying a lot of attention to the voice overs for future episodes.

Fat Ninja is pretty comical, I loved him, his death was well, cut short. I should have embellished more.


AuzAuz

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very nice movie

Graphics: Very nice 3D effects. I must say though, the fight didn´t really looked that good. It looks a little weird that their whole bodies move and not just their arms when they swing their katana´s, know what I mean? I understand that might be a little diffecult to make, but maybe you should practise a bit more with that.

Sounds: The voices were not bad, but like the guy before me, I sometimes couldn´t hear what the fat guy was saying either. You did gave the other ninja subtitles, why didn´t you give the fat ninja and the mcdonals guy subtitles as well? It also didn´t had any subtitles at the end. I think you should just add them everywere in the movie. As for the other things, well the music was okay. It could use some sounds at some places like during the fight.

Interactivity: Well it got plenty of options at the end, but what I missed was a simple replay button. It would be nice if you added that.

Humor: I think the fat guys order took a bit long and later in the movie the mcdonald guy repeated it all again. Got a little boring, but it was still a very funny movie.

Overall 8 out of 10, 4 out of 5. Well even though there are still some things to improve, I think it was a very nice movie overall. I watched part 3 as well and I think your doing a very good job. I hope you´ll make many more. Keep up the excellent work.


PureCarnage responds:

I can work the subtitles in for all characters. Trying to make improvements in all areas, these flashes are great opportunities to sharpen my skills.


BloodIncBloodInc

Rated 4 / 5 stars

LOL

A change to UNS, but the voices really didnt fit .

5/5


PureCarnage responds:

Yeah... I agree on the voices... so we will do something different for the next UNS.

The change is because I'm experimenting, this series is great for that... they are studies into many aspects of flash.

I like the graphical upgrade with the static non vector background images.

I am going to try to up the graphical quality.


NorthDakotaNorthDakota

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Do Not Blame The Mc Donalds!

Yeah, UNS rules... But his one was not as good as UNS 3... I could'nt understand the fat ninja... So next time, please put subtitles... The Mc Donalds: Great place you've chosen...
"Don't blame the Mc Donalds!" That was funny as hell...
The fight was ok, cool music, so...
It was good you added story in it...


PureCarnage responds:

Yeah, this whole experimental fun series has really taught me a lot about 3D animation, what works and doesn't work for characters. It's all very benifitial to the next on in the series and all my future flash.

The story is good, but also bad... some people just want action, others want story... I need to find the happy medium.

I think the voices are going to have to change, I was experimenting with them, but clearly its not working for what I want so new voices in UNS 5.

Sometimes different isn't always good.


LazyMuffinLazyMuffin

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Well

First, that wasnt a flash animation, it was made with something else.

Secound, the voice acting was preety bad.

Third, it just wasnt funny.


PureCarnage responds:

Yeah I guess.