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Apr 18, 2006 | 4:06 PM EDT
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frame by frame pencil animation from last year. Not really anything I feel that shows my potential now with flash or otherwise, but I'd like to have some more stuff to my name on NG before Simple Line 8 comes out, haha.

A basic metaphor, the story of rebirth.



Rated 4 / 5 stars


Good stuff. Nice tune as well.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I love that not bad for a week

I like the robotic man guy and the graphics are pretty good the girl was a nice touch along with the flower and the end hum seems like it was a robot sent to destroy. Looks can be deceiving I guess, the flower was a nice gesture by the young girl but didn't change the fait she had in store well all in all good flash I loved it kinda reminded me of linkin park vs Minushi or something but vary original nice work do more


Rated 4 / 5 stars

not bad but

you need more frames to make things look much smoother. very nice style it just looked as though you had 1 sec per frame at some points. im no annimator nor have i gone to school just yet ( not till i come back to the states to study). i highly suggest you read Richard Williams : The Annimator's Survival Kit. teaches how to give things that xtra "Snap" wich would have done very well in this film. nicley done for a rushed assainment though. keep up the good work just add some snap. i xspecially liked the xplosion. best i can do for supportive criticism.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


That was treuly amazing man ^^

i personally think its better without collour.

This is really amazing.

That girl was nice to the robot, and he just blew himself up :P lol.

what a bastard ^^

annyway, keep em coming!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nice.

This was a great animation, if some colour(I'm australia please don't say anything about how I spell colour) was added, i'm sure my score would go up even more.

But yes, I understand you had 4-5 days to do it, so yes, very impressive.