Suuuuure....
It's so kewl for a first flash but it's missing something... LEGS! Anyway u desirve a 4 noooo a 5 becose it's u're first and it rocks!
Author Comments
This is my first Flash cartoon. I started out learning how to animate the character walking. Once I had that done I decided to make a little movie out of it and had Bif tell a joke. It's an old joke but I always liked it. It's short and to the point and just a little bit gross. I hope you like it. I fixed the resolution on this one so it lines up correctly. I also added a replay button.
Ok...
For a first flash, it's pretty good. But it was still kinda stupid >>. Make a movie with more of a point. Keep trying.
it was ok but
you should make the movie fit the whole screen because otherwise it looks tackie, and make it a bit longer.
Nice!
The animation of the guy walking is very good.
Keep it up!
Cheers!
Very good.
I think this will stay , But first a little bit of comments.
At first for a first flash this is really good , And not as other peoples first flash.
At second I think you should draw more backgrounds , As for grass - Make a little bit green points so it will look a little bit more realistic, and I think you should draw a few clouds too.
Other than that this is really good. Very good and I hope you get good flash skills.