It's looks alright.
This is ok. Are you going to work on more movies ever? It's kinda short but fine to you. The glass that broke is a little off. And you sort of dash fast like speed of light. Keep up!
BlackBoo
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
I know it's really short, sorry.
This is my first flash movie. It's kind of a test to see what I can do. It's probably the only thing I've actually ever finished.
I plan to make a series of shorts using this style. I have a few ideas and hope to make a series of some sort out of it... hopefully.
I like to read comments and suggestions so please take the time to review.
Thanks.
It's looks alright.
This is ok. Are you going to work on more movies ever? It's kinda short but fine to you. The glass that broke is a little off. And you sort of dash fast like speed of light. Keep up!
BlackBoo
Wow this response is sooo late.... Yeah I still plan on makin more one day. I am going to university to study games development, which includes programming, animation and design as well as working with flash. So I will post the things I make on here and maybe even be motivated to finish the "short stories" I had planned.
Thanks - Scorp.
Heh.
hah, cool little gag & you've got a nice graphic style, good stuff, keep at it!
Cheers dude. Glad you like. I'v started working on a bunch of shorts in the same style.
It was ok
It was short, but whatever. The broken glass looked cool.
Cheers, but I think I over did it!
Blow You Away
For your first video, it's not bad. You even said it was short, so I have nothing bad to say
Thank! So many people still said it was short even though I put that in the description!! I guess thats the only major fault.
nice but..........
you shouldnt make the glass crack so much.
Thanks I'll change it for next time when I make it longer!