Nice idea

So with this one it was a nice idea and concept i like the art style too and seemed to really all come together so glad i had a chance to check this one out

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Great!

The only episode left that I've missed, I think. Great graaphics/concept as always. Looking forward to more of these, keep up the good work!

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omg

the voices were funny lol

NOT AT ALL GOOD, IT WAS PUK-TASTIC.

"After months of hard work and hours and hours spent at my desk I have finally completed my greatest animation achievment to date." Months? You mean two hours. Listen, stop submitting, and start working on your graphics, script, and voices. The script, HORRIBLE, I mean ohh, i blew my nose on a tissue. RETARTED. If its going to be called "Not a Fairy Tale", then do a murder mystery or something that would never happen in fairy tales.

Improve it!

Okay, first of all the intro is way too long. Maybe if you were doing a five hour long flash movie, an intro of that length would be a little bit more appropriate!

Secondly, the movie is too short and follows absolutely no plot or storyline at all. Come on, do a little bit more thinking before you start a flash movie. 75% of the time, you will get better results if you put it all together in your head or on paper first, because obviously randomness is not your expertise.

Lastly, I don't get how the title you chose for this has anything to do with the bizarre flash you create.

Anyway, you have the basic flash experience. Stop this series, sit down, and think of something completely new and innovative because what you have now...sucks (sorry to say). I hope this helps, because you can do it if you really try harder!