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a battle between two different skilled ninjas. Scenes from Ninja Scroll...
Yer not to bad nice grafix.I don't like that style but thats just wat i think.Eny ways hope it turns out good ;)
Greenintern covered most of what I've to say..
As with Green, I took think it was just a bit drawn out in some areas, but was overall a fairly short movie. The rain, while I miseed if there were clouds or not- could have been a better sound for the rain. It seemed a very low quality file that someone just turned the volume up on. I definately agree with Green in the establishing shots area- movies like this typicaly worry me when you only know what's going on at the very moment, rather then have a little idea of what lead up to it, or even just showing the step 1 (two people meeting, go at it) rather than starting out at two people, starting to go at it.
Overall you did a prety good job, but a few areas could have been better.
The graphics were pretty good, but not as detailed as I'd hoped for a movie like this. The background was particularly done well.
youve traced it so well. Hmm I forgot the name of that episode. Sigh. I give you props. When people trace they seem to not try well doing it but youve done it. Good job.
At first glance, I'd give it an 8 but a second....
It's not as good as i thought the first time seeing it. the graphics were good, and style...i've seen it before somewhere, but when it came to plot, there was none, title was eluding, and the fight scenes were repetitive. the black and white were interesting but about 10 secs after u realize that it's the same over and over, and for the part where the Rambo/Ranma lookin guy is staring off into space (ok i know he's looking at the masked ninja) it's a full damn six blinks he does....u have any idea how unnecessarily freakin' long that useless point is?
Extend, work on plot, and shorten the small details and don't repeat.
Needed more to it
It implied that there was a story but didn't have one. Only try to bring up a story if there is one. And the fighting if you noticed repeated when it went to white and black.
A short film about a park bench
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