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a battle between two different skilled ninjas. Scenes from Ninja Scroll...
ok it was a good but it could use a bit more the violence was that imprecive when you look at it. its about two ninja's fighting with diffreant skills you would expect it to be more violent! the graphics was alsome and so was the style but you need to work on the sound music would be good for it fight heavy metal idk i gave you a overall of 8 you should be honered cause the highest i normaly give is 6
got job on the graphics
it is true it is a bit like ninja scroll
but nice animation
Well this was directly rotoscoped from the Ninja Scroll movie. You main ninja even looks like a dodgy Jubei. If people are wondering why the clothes change it's because different scene's from the movie have been traced instead of one continous scene.
If you do something like this and don't give credit to the people that actually MADE what you traced then you're just stealing it outright.
That is what this piece needs. The last reviewer was right - that's a regular martial arts uniform he's wearing in the beginning. Then it's what appears to be a robe of some sort. Then no shirt - but with all these mixed from scene to scene.
Also, they cross swords (extremely close range).
Next shot: They are facing off at mid to long range.
Next shot: The unmasked ninja is sprinting across a huge field toward his adversary.
This is why the violence gets a zero. Clean up the clothes glitch (something to do with the pictures you're sketching from?), give credit to someone if you're using their images (I don't watch Ninja Scroll, so I can't be certain), and provide transitions for your scenes so that the combat makes sense.
This could easily be a perfect 10.
a big o piece of crap
first of all, you practically sketched all the animation DIRECTLY from Ninja Scroll and it's NOT COOL that you don't even try to credit them
second of all there was no direct flow from scene to scene, first he has a shirt, then he doesn't, then they're fighting but suddently the other guy has his back turned....they fight again and seperate...now they're in a grass field but no wait, they're still on the rocky cliff??? WTF....you could rearrange them in a completely random order and get the exact same result: pointless.
1 out of 5
A short film about a park bench
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