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A short story/animation of two fighers. Another style i am practicing with. Lets say this is kinda a test.
Taken a thought
Unlike the last review i read that u said THIS WAS AN EXPERIMENT. I liked the oriental theme but i have jsut one critism- couldn't you at least completely finnish the drawings? The begining drawing was finnished, but y not the rest?
The music was okay, there could have been a better selection but it was good :)
short as hell
"pmg deers des two doods who wanna be kang and then they fight and one duud dies"
My only problem was music, it was good for setting the mood in the beginning, I'd advise if you want to make it better, to get a different track maybe halfway through, or even right after it says to be king. Possibly something heavier would create a good contrast.
that had its good points to it, the song the story, and maybe the animation. I think you got the animation idea from mask maybe? if not, it might help to look at what he did, he was very succesfull, O found it to be too scetchy tone it down a little, you don't need color though keep on doing what your doing just look around and see what was deemed good by ng
Potenial, but no point.
As previous reviewer said, this animator has got potenial. but isn't using it at its full extent. the animation also lacked "effect". meaning it was boring and felt pretty pointless.
Keep up the good work, add some sounds and give us some color!
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