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Apr 6, 2006 | 8:23 AM EDT
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A short story/animation of two fighers. Another style i am practicing with. Lets say this is kinda a test.

Reviews


jaxx-77jaxx-77

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

try again

im not throwin this down or anything, but why was it so short and so sudden to end?!?



Liquid-moon-lightLiquid-moon-light

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

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kinda short...but i liked it...keep it up!!



krOnikghOstkrOnikghOst

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Its Kool

Feelin the story line... kind of a good storyline... much needed to be added so it can be better... overall its OK & kool... like the sketchin' alot...



ValientishimoValientishimo

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

So... why are they saying this is like Mask?

To be honest I only see three similarities and they're all insignificant.
1] The leaf (pretty common sight)
2] They stare at eachother (woo... like that wasn't done before Mask)
3] It has two people fighting with swords (by golly I've never seen that anywheres else! and technically it was himself in Mask)

The most important point, however, is the fact that it's a freaking SKETCH. Good lord just calm down! It's good for what it is: practice! Thats how it should be judged as!

The only thing bad I have to say about this was that while it was nice how scenes were broken up with narration, it was too much of it. Try to make it more visual with backgrounds or a pre-fight scene of the king's funeral and crowns for the princes during that scene. Just an idea if you ever take it past sketch-mode...

Oh and yeah, I get how you do try to say that the good side doesn't always win. Crazies are in the lead just as much.



Dracoonx4Dracoonx4

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Eh... Come on...

It was kind of lame, the music was pretty annoying. The words between the scene seemed annoying and it really cut off the flow of the battle. It wasn't long enough to be dramatic or serious enough. I did however love the style.