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Apr 4, 2006 | 12:43 AM EDT

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Yeh hey this is the first part of it, the second part is better...all prettyed up and stuff, i want to no wat ppl think of this 1st part neway...T-Bone, plz leave suggestions

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DegillinDegillin

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Loads of potential!

Graphics: Backgrounds are very pleasing to the eye...could use a background of total grass or just tiles of a kitchen! Everything could use alil more graphics...i didn't know what that white thing was...a maget or a tell peice of ashes?
Style: This is definatly unique, and it clicks as your own!
Sound: I seem to repeat myself the most on this...needs background music...the flash portal is there to help out with music! (I would like to see a music video based on the audio portal) But voices is a good idea.
Violence: Everything had red blood, and there is suggestive stabbing!
Humor; HAHAHA the fly swatter was bleeding!
Overall: How much I personally enjoyed it! I love to see story lines in flashes, it really shows creativity! Keep it up, I am kinda looking forward to the next ep.



SithLairdSithLaird

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Plenty of potential here...

Graphics: Too much blackness! The characters and the motions seem to have great fluidity in motion, and rather nice detail - when we get to see it. Even motion in a "greyed' darkness where shapes are perceptible would be prefferable to complete darkness all of that time.

Style: It looks great, if not lacking detail and backgrounds, it would rate much higher.

Sound: Great, but the mic-recorded voices are a *slight* muffled, and could be clearer. Music would be nice too.

Violence: Again - plenty of it, and nice bloodspray - a fly with a samurai sword is nice originality - but where is the detail in wounds? The corpses? Or a reason behind the violence?

Interactivity: Clear Navigation.

Humor: It's there, and it's waiting for the rest of the traits to catch up, because it's great, and the small flaws lack it's luster.

Overall: 8. An uncut diamond, waiting to be shaped and polished to a gleaming clarity and shine.

Voted a 4.


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OnitholopeOnitholope

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Interesting concept

A very good shot flash, definantly should become a series. Maybe get some music in the background. Plus you're spelling is bad. Spell check people, Spell check! Overall, a good film.



DjGurkDjGurk

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

LOL

Why did the fly swatter start bleeding when it was cut. Didn't really make sense, but i liked the idea.



RismardRismard

Rated 5 / 5 stars

T-Bone that was awesome

I like what u done with it...can't wait to c part2


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