I like it

It was not the best put together the animations could be smoother the sound was notbad and overall this whole piece was decent

~X~

Heh

Love it. Great scenery, simple graphics, smooth animation and a comical concept as well. It's a bit short and without real storyline, but keep workin on it! Audio could be optimized too. Keep it up!

-cd-

meh

the good:
nice sounds and nice backgrounds. you also put thought into your flash and added a story to it.

the bad:
the animations were pretty dull and the story was really confusing.

the ugly:
umm, try to be more clear with your story, so that one could understand what's going on. and try to improve on your drawing and animation skills.
other than that: good try!

good try

you gave it a good go and thats all that counts

Im confused...

What is going on? Maybe if your flash looked better it could afford to stray from the story. I didnt have a clue of what was going on through out the flash although I think you at least tryed to give us a good story. This is a good base to improve upon so good luck with part two.