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Tentative Sword Trailer

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This is a mock-up intro of a game i'd like to make, once i learn to script. I just want a bloody hack and slash game with a huge sword man!

i made the music with default garageband loops

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I understand its a trailer, but...

..its still not very good; short, storyless and pretty much actionless, it was pointless :P next time make it more exiting and bloody or however youre hoping to make the game

man, not great

if wasnt great. might make a good game with a little work but im not likin it. i look forward to it as a game with some script and maybe another few mins added on though

hmm...

kinda short but it has a LOT of potential as a game. also, you might want a less deceptive title. i'm gonna go out on a limb here and consider it a teaser.

nice style

Man it would be cool if you made this into a game cuz this looked realy nice.

jposh responds:

thanks!

4.5

Considering that this is your first movie, and you have already done this - I can only imagine with some more time and expierence what you will be able to do. While the artwork is not all that great for the majority of the film, I was pleasently surprised at how nice the motions were. The most interesting part was in the end with the replay section and the close-up shot of the character. I liked the movements and it seemed pretty good. In future work, I would like to see more on an emphasis on the plot and a reasoning for the actions of the characters. Not that bad, good luck.

Ryan

jposh responds:

thanks for the constructiveness of ytour criticism!

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