Score: 5
"Didn´t expected much, but it wasn´t bad"
date: April 2, 2006
Graphics: In the beginning they didn´t looked that good, but later on (during the dream) they were alright. I liked the backgroundcolor and the stars. The houses looked alright as well. I also liked the drawing style there, everything looked pretty cool. There´s still some room for improvement though, you could improve the beginning a bit. Perhaps you should try to draw a real person instead of a stick figure. During the dream it is alright to keep the stickfigure in in, I understand it´s a little diffecult to draw a flying person in 3d.
Music/Sounds: I must say, I really liked the backgroundmusic during the dream. It suited the movie very well. The intro with the trombone was alright. No sounds, but that´s okay. Anyway, I think the music is the best part of this movie.
Interactivity: I got a small complaint here. When you press the replay button, you got back to the "stick figure death theater"-screen made by blablabla. I think it would be better if you directly go to the beginning of the movie, but like I said it´s just a small complaint. You don´t really have to change that if it´s too much trouble.
Overall 5 out of 10. Well when I looked at the score I didn´t really expected much, but it was not bad actually. I didn´t liked the ending that much though. Still I think this flash deserves a little higher score and I think you could do better then this. Try to make it a little longer, improve your drawings a bit and I´m sure it´ll be a lot better.
